@NCMentisArt To be blunt: 'Too unoriginal'.
"akin to lord of the rings"... "instead of elves [yadda-yadda-yadda]"...
Storytellers all already get "inspired" by all the other stories they know. The best stories are those which are the most original.
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That's highly debatable, but I digress.
Also, this isn't meant to be a serious story to begin with. I was considering it having it be a tongue-in-cheek dark comedy if possible.
However, if you were to tackle a story like this, how would you do it to make it more original? I'm open for suggestions/advice.
@NCMentisArt If you are looking for co-writers, you should try NG's Writing sub-forum:
https://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/forum/18
Or the Collab system:
https://www.newgrounds.com/collab
https://www.newgrounds.com/collab/edit-list
Alright, thanks.
Yatsufusa
This may not be the best feedback, but: I could not muster the strength to read that to the end...
NCMentisArt
Lol. Too much?